It was okay, ill give it that. It kept my attention for most of the duration but I kinda think that this is something more for youtube than newgrounds. Whatever.
Yeah I have no idea what thats all about but it looked awesome, and for some reason amused me. Keep Up the good work and stuff.
Mostly Harmless Mike
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Thank you very much, i'm glad you liked it ^^
Well, it was an ok animation but it needs a couple of things:
1. Real Voice Acting
2. Slightly Longer Storyline
3. Better fight scene
Let me explain. The concept was sound and had some real posibility, but the story didn't explain its self well enough. If you had added real voice acting and more leading up to the massacare, it would have flowed better. Also it would have been more funny if the fight scene was longer and the cheddar did something more intresting than just shooting (spoofing the Martix or Scarface would work). Do that to make it better! If you want I'd be willing to help rebuild this animaion (send me a PM if your intrested).
the voice acting is probably getting done TONIGHT so yea thats covered, and ive been thinking about adding an extra scene, i dont want to revamp this flash just yet, but in a few months sure, maybe. and yes, i will stay funky.
Okay so not really, but still. I had no idea you were making another one! Lucky me. Your first one was awesome, this is even better. Dude you are Awesome. Thats all I can say.
Look man it's cool in some ways. As far as a game goes, this one has potential but...
Honestly I have no idea what to do, where to go, what the plot is. If you put a little more time into this and put some in game directions to get the user headed in the right direction, this could be a cool game. Also, hate to be a kill joy but, the graphics kinda suck.
You got some giltches to work out, but thats not really bad, nearly every game dose.
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